[Read Ebook] ♶ His Wicked Pleasure (The Wicked Series Book 1) ⚖ Tyrakel.de

I couldn t finish the book It seems that there is a good plot for the book but I just couldn t get into it due to the writing style I m not sure if I m extremely picky or if the author just didn t know how to write a proper scene From what I read, there were barely any transitions and the author did not even try to paint a picture of the setting nor the scenario so the reader is left guessing as to what the hell is even going on One moment Declan and Kristie run into each other and then they re in the restaurant seated in tables next to each other How did they even get inside Did she ever pick up her purse and the things in it How do you even open a car door, which has a wide arc, and run into someone outside your car door Anyways, I wish this book was throughly edited, I honestly feel like I would ve enjoyed it.P.S When the word, gesture, was spelled as jester, I was seriously done. [Read Ebook] ♢ His Wicked Pleasure (The Wicked Series Book 1) ⚔ Lieutenant Declan Kavanagh Is A Powerful Navy SEAL And A Force To Be Reckoned With His Commanding Presence Exudes Strength, Dominance, And Power The Moment He Accidently Knocks Into The Beautiful Kristie Rossi And Sends Her Crashing To The Ground, He Knew He Had To Have Her Doing Her Best To Avoid The Handsome Lieutenant At Every Cost, Kristie Finds That Fate Has Other Plans As She Finds Herself Needing His Help Often Than Not Will She Give In To The Promise Of Forever With The Handsome Navy SEAL And Finally Allow His Desire For Her To Be Satiated Or Will She Close The Door On Their Passion His Wicked Pleasure by Christina Gallo is a sweet romance Kristie owns her own company and Declan is a Navy SEAL They meet and their hormones spark and ignite almost immediately but a nasty ex lurks in Kristie s life He tries to wreak a little havoc but Declan to the rescue as much as Kristie will allow.Declan is the strong, protective, hot looking type while Kristie is an independent woman with strong family ties I really enjoyed her character and smart aleck responses and comments She isn t a weak woman looking for a man to make her life complete It was complete without Declan he s just icing on the cake.I m a suspense addict and felt unfulfilled There is a tiny bit of mystery and intrigue but it seemed unfinished and left me hanging I clung to the unknown and missed the real point of the story When I consider the ending I liked it but won t give away any spoilers Overall His Wicked Pleasure is an entertaining If you re a heavy romance reader I absolutely recommend this book An ARC provided in exchange for an honest review.This is my first book by this author and I just couldn t past up the chance to review it based on the synopsis It grabbed me instantly Hot Navy Sealcheck Alpha Malecheck Hot sexy scenescheck Captivating story linecheck His Wicked Pleasure is a story that is sure to have you turning the pages as fast as you can Great character development and flawless writing style come together for a read that is sure to keep you entertained This may have been my first book by Christina Gallo, but it won t be my last I was given this book for an honest review and am pleased to say the story did not disappoint Delighted to see the development between the characters, nothing was rushed, and the plot had an even flow Looking forward to reading from this author Highly recommend. This book really bothered me The plot was nothing I hadn t seen before, the writing was choppy and poorly written, and I couldn t even get into the book because the paragraphs were so short.First off, paragraphs should not consist of five sentences or less and for the record, most were three sentences or less , most of which were only a line of dialogue Because of this I couldn t get into the book, I didn t know what was really going on, there was absolutely no setting development, and I was really annoyed and pissed off Second, the writing besides being choppy due to short sentences and paragraphs was not fitting to modern America The wording was way too formal and even annoying Consider the following After my stomach emptied, I managed to look up at him and told him to get out I pointed to the door and screamed, now, and take your stenchiness with you I ran around the house opened up every single window while I sprayed floral air freshener everywhere The above is taken from the book I don t know of a single person, who lives in modern times, and is American, who talks like this This person WOULD talk like this Yeah I puked all over the floor before I could finally look up at him and kick his ass out she laughed Then I told him to take his stink with him I swear, it took all of my windows being open, and a full can of fabreeze to get rid of that smell S.S Now I m no big shot author or anything, but I can tell you that the one I wrote is does run smoothly and realistically Now I can tell that the author is only meaning to get a good book out these I can definitely see some potential, the bones so to speak are there With a little extra work, there might be something really worth reading But not yet I do not recommend this book to anyone annoyed at ridiculously small paragraphs, terrible writing, or plots they have likely already read before.S.S.